The
issue of pronoun agreement is something of a mine field
for writers. The enemies are all around us. If we write
a sentence like this one, the grammarians will be out
to get us:
If a driver [singular]
refuses to take a blood or breath test, they [plural]
will have their [plural] licenses suspended for six
months.
If
we substitute he for they and his for
their, the language police will still be after
us, though on another charge: sexism. If we replace
the plural pronouns with he or she and him
or her, we could be booked on the charge of bad
style (read the sentence out loud and you’ll hear why).
If we switch to she or her,using these pronouns
generically, we may be accused of eccentricity or even
“political correctness.” According to
The
American Heritage Book of English Usage, only
3 percent of its usage panel supported using she
and her generically (177).
Some
writers have become so frustrated with pronoun agreement
that they recommend throwing out the grammar rule altogether.
“Why not allow they and their to
be either singular or plural and be done with it?”
they reason. Certainly, if we look at actual usage,
especially in speech, we must admit that the grammar
rule is broken all the time. Even in writing, the practice
of pairing they with a singular antecedent is
relatively widespread. According to
The American
Heritage Book of English Usage, “[This
practice] can be found in such mainstream publications
as Christian Science Monitor, The Washington
Post, Discover, and Wall Street
Journal” (179).
Despite
evidence of current usage, few experts are prepared
to abandon the rule. When presented with the sentence
The typical student in the program takes about six
years to complete their course work, 82 percent
of a recent usage panel objected to using the plural
pronoun their to refer to the singular noun student
(
American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language
1796).
Many
experts feel that the rule on pronoun agreement has
a logical rationale worth preserving: Singular goes
with singular and plural with plural.
Barbara Wallraff
argues that allowing they to be either singular
or plural could lead to confusion, as in this example:
Each topic in the self-esteem
curriculum is covered in detail, so that the children
may be aware of their importance.
"Is
that the topic’s importance or the children’s?"
writes Wallraff (32). The possible confusion is at first
hard to see, but that’s because we all know that
their, being plural, must refer to children,
not to topic. If their can be either singular
or plural, however, a potential ambiguity does arise:
Their could refer to topic or to children.
If we allow they to be either singular or plural
for the purposes of pronoun agreement, what do we do
about subject-verb agreement? Consider the following
sentence:
A year later, someone
finally admitted that they were involved in the kidnapping.
Assuming
that the word they can be singular (to match
someone), should we write “admitted that
they was involved”? Let’s hope not! But
allowing they to be both singular and plural
in the same sentence seems a stretch: It defies logic.
And how easy it is, after all, to fix the sentence:
A year later, someone
finally admitted to being involved in the kidnapping.
As a matter of fact, adhering
to the rule on pronoun agreement is not as difficult
as it might seem. There are any number of effective
revision strategies a writer might turn to. Consider,
for example, three possible ways to revise the sample
sentence given earlier:
Make the antecedent
plural.
If drivers refuse to take a blood or breath test,
they will have their licenses suspended for six months.
Restructure the sentence, perhaps using who.
Drivers who refuse to take a blood or breath test
will have their licenses suspended for six months.
Switch from third person to first person (I
or we) or second person (you).
If you refuse to take a blood or breath test, you
will have your license suspended for six months. [NOTE:
Check your grammar handbook for appropriate uses of
I and you.]
Here are other strategies
that will work at least some of the time.
— Drop the pronoun
— Change the
pronoun to the or a.
— Repeat the noun.
— Find another clever way to write around the
problem.
Conclusion: There is little
reason to throw out a perfectly good rule. With practice,
writers can learn to satisfy everyone: the grammarians,
the feminists, the stylists, and those who are annoyed
by so-called political correctness.