At one time, writers were advised,
“Never split an infinitive.” That hard-and-fast rule is
finally being laid to rest. The modern rule is more
flexible: Yes, avoid split infinitives when they
sound awkward, but don’t go into verbal contortions to avoid them.
AWKWARD SPLIT INFINITIVE
In our next newsletter, we will try to more
clearly articulate company policy.
[Better: to articulate company policy more
clearly.]
AWKWARD AVOIDANCE OF A SPLIT INFINITIVE
In an attempt to free the hostages, the SWAT team
decided boldly to raid the plane.
[Better: decided to boldly raid
the plane.]
Usage experts have been surprisingly passionate in
their campaign against the rule banning all split
infinitives. In her 1996 book Woe Is I, Patricia
O’Conner gives the rule a tombstone icon and labels it
RIP—rest in peace (182). Writing in 1975, William Morris
and Mary Morris called the rule a “pedantic bogey”
dating from the nineteenth century (338).
The New York Public Library Writer’s Guide to Style
and Usage fills us in on the
history:
Split infinitives . . . were accepted until a grammar
book published in 1854, The Queen’s English,
strongly opposed placing words between to and the
stem of the verb. This pronouncement became the sole
authority until 1926, when H. G. Fowler . . . argued
that personal style and meaning should take precedence.
(148)
Why have the experts fought so hard against the
absolute ban on split infinitives? The reason is simple:
They care about good writing. As R. H. Copperud puts it,
“If a sentence doesn’t sound right, it isn’t any good,
whether the sentence is split, rewoven, braided, or
sawed in half” (202).
The effort to avoid the split infinitive at all costs
has possibly resulted in more bad writing than the split
infinitive itself. Consider the following examples,
given by Rene J. Cappon.
AWKWARD AVOIDANCE OF A SPLIT
They said they would try carefully to
dislodge the tangle of twisted girders tomorrow.
They said they would try to dislodge
carefully the tangle of twisted girders
tomorrow. (115)
BETTER: SPLITTING THE INFINITIVE
They said they would try to
carefully dislodge the tangle of
twisted girders tomorrow.
Richard Lederer and Richard Dowis go so far as to
hint that unsplitting an infinitive can at times be an
error—because the revision changes the intended meaning
or results in ambiguity. Consider their example of a
correct split infinitive.
He decided to promptly return
the money he found.
The following alternatives change the meaning because
promptly attaches itself to the wrong word.
He promptly decided to return the money
he found.
He decided to return the money he found
promptly.
And this next alternative is ambiguous because we
can’t tell whether promptly goes with
decided or return.
He decided promptly to return the money
he found. (90)
There are times, of course, when a split infinitive
sounds more awkward than alternative phrasing. Rene J.
Cappon gives a few examples:
AWKWARD SPLIT INFINITIVES
The company hopes to substantially
increase profits.
They promised to at all times
obey the law of the land.
They planned to quickly and decisively
deal with the economic slump.
(116)
Unsplitting these infinitives results in more
graceful phrasing: to increase profits
substantially; to obey the law of the land
at all times; to deal with the economic
slump quickly and decisively.
William Morris and Mary Morris can have the last
word: On the matter of split infinitives, they advise,
“Proceed with caution, but not in fear”
(338).